rbcdart's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ranma]

What a great concept, she stays in character and is well drawn. In a better world this would be a snap from an episode. Not really feeling the background. It drifts into the something had to be there categorie. Thank you!

[A mechanical torture]

Great concept, I like the design. I have trouble with the contrast of the drawing inside the skull vs outside the skull. It seems as though the piece is a progress stage where the contents inside the skull latter become simplified and color is added to the eyes (red lines) etc. I like the homage to clockwork orange (the movie) and scenes from the film in blue but again, they are not developed.

NicoGomZay responds:

Thank you for the constructive comment, I will take it into account for future projects.

[Food Girls Designs]

Actually, I am sort of interested in the person they are looking at (I am fairly sure it is not me).

[Teacher Rabbit]

I love it, too much foreground maybe, perhaps a tighter crop onto the character and the chalkboard with what she is writing being legible. Still, proud to share it in my favorites, thank you!

[Fake taxi]

Well drawn, great concept, good fun, and I have kept coming back to it.

[Sabrina- Pokemon]

Like the glow and the drawing as a whole. I think a little more value range would have made it better.

SteveFeane responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

[Crazy Red]

Yeah, sometimes one just needs to get away from one's self and paint... still, success rate may be higher without the drinking for letting go like this.

[Fingers]

The value range is muted in the photo. I think this contributes to the marsh at dawn atmosphere. The hip and legs of the central character are a little too undefined? Still, It could be stronger with more contrast and color purity in the foreground. Thank you, nice piece.

[painting me drawing]

micron pens on a gray scale drawing or photograph can be wonderful...

[Mr Potato - Painting]

Love the similarity between the potato and the human. Impact of the piece is wonderful. The dark triangle in the bottom right acts as a drain and pulls my eye out of the picture, putting the white copyright words in that dark space might cure 2 problems. The cut away to see the potato is not convincing. The humans shadow ignores the cutaway and it seems as though the tree is growing in a pit... a narrower strip of green stuff maybe? Great expression on the potato and human! Thank you for sharing this.